Andrew and Kyra first tried to catch a rabbit. Do you see a rabbit? Because I don’t.
Andrew was frustrated with Kyra’s lack of understanding of his (mostly confusing) hand and arm signals. Then we came inside and tossed my manuscript in the air. No. Really. We did.
Here’s proof:
Even the dog helped:
Don’t you wish this was your manuscript?
There is actually a reason behind all the insanity. It’s an exercise from Donald Maass’ Writing the Breakout Novel Workbook. Tension on every page. The only way, according to Mr. Maass, to edit every page for tension is to do it out of order. I have no reason to doubt this. If nothing else, the kids had fun tossing the manuscript into the air.
Writing Wrongs 
