The line edits … they are here.
Note to to Darcy: Don’t worry, she did NOT write on every page.
Last page = intact.
Master debater line (hee, hee) = intact.
The rest, I think, is negotiable.
Note to everyone else: At some point, I’m sure I’ll get a hold of myself and stop recording every tiny step in this process. I wouldn’t count on that being any time soon.
Writing Wrongs 
I’m so excited for you… don’t stop telling us every little thing.
Squeeeeee!! Ain’t it purty?
So cool!
LOL, Charity, it’s great to see you having such a good time with this!